tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124742253011280824.post2284901644462447036..comments2010-06-08T16:56:53.457-07:00Comments on Rubina's site: Essay no#1rubina akterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09323478990282034280noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124742253011280824.post-48640288557018517432010-03-22T00:40:13.580-07:002010-03-22T00:40:13.580-07:00The essay was in depth. Very organized and all par...The essay was in depth. Very organized and all paragraphs supported your thesis statement. Very few minor grammar mistakes that can be easly fixed. Great examples and self involment to further support your ideas.Geidyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02754808171992530263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124742253011280824.post-75472950866806765632010-03-21T17:03:56.204-07:002010-03-21T17:03:56.204-07:00Yesterday, I played the movie "Food Inc."...Yesterday, I played the movie "Food Inc." at work . My co-workers were totally disgusted on what they saw. This afternooin when they came to work they all came up to me and said "Reality Check, Thanks". They all mentioned the part of the movie when the husband suffered from diabetes and not eating correctly due to the family budget and were all shaken up. It does not seem right to have one member suffer from a disease and have the family suffer because they cant enjoy a nutrinal meal due to economic reasons. You make great points.Angel Aguilarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00173216262552495583noreply@blogger.com